Laurence "Wins" : writer and friend

by Philippe Moisan Tutorial videos, sci-fi writer
I got in touch with Laurence 5 months ago. Unfortunately, he is not a member of APSense. I'm working on it. :)
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I'm a prolific writer. In 4 months, I've written more than 120 articles at APSense, also about 20 RevPages.

Some members say I write clearly. I get good feedback on many of my articles, sometimes amazing feedback on the content.

2 weeks ago, I created a page on my IM blog where I put the links to all my articles on the Internet.

The next day, I got a PM from Laurence. He was responding to a post I had written on the forum where he is the most active.

We hadn't talked for some time. He was happy to get some news from me.

I gave him the link to my blog's page I just mentioned. Inside, I told myself "He will be impressed by the number of articles I have written."

He gave me feedback.

With me, Laurence is totally honest.

He gave no comment on the quality of the information I had written.

No. Instead, Laurence acted like Laurence.

He commented on the quality of my writing. He mentioned that I'm not careful with punctuation.

I made a joke about his feedback then said I appreciated his input.

He responded he never hesitated to tell me the truth about the way I do things, cause he knows I can take it.

The other thing he mentioned was : work on the things I tell you, your writing will go from good to great.

Now that made my day ! :)

He did say he doesn't treat everyone like that. He figured out I am ambitious and always looking for ways to improve what I do.

In my humble opinion, Laurence could be an awesome teacher of writing online.

Go see his website. You'll get a better chance to know how he works.

If your first language is not English, it won't stop him. He will simply tell you what to do. Plain and simple.

Laurence, I hope you like this RevPage.

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About Philippe Moisan Magnate II     Tutorial videos, sci-fi writer

4,455 connections, 180 recommendations, 13,881 honor points.
Joined APSense since, August 20th, 2010, From Quebec, Canada.

Created on Jan 21st 2011 10:57. Viewed 1,232 times.


Jim B. Advanced   Internet & eBusiness
we all need a mentor and a teacher to reach our full potential in whatever we do.
Jan 21st 2011 17:49   
Alfred B. Advanced   eMarketer
Definitely a great site for ESL speakers like me to learn more on writing effective articles.Thanks!
Jan 22nd 2011 00:55   
Alfred B. Advanced   eMarketer
worth the time to check the site out!
Jan 22nd 2011 00:55   
Irene Blackett Committed   Marketing Tools And Training
great article! Thanks.
Jan 22nd 2011 08:11   
Craig Traudt Advanced   Working on a Big Project
We should all take more interest in writing. Thanks
Jan 22nd 2011 09:51   
Terry Quested Junior  
i'm new to APSense and still trying to work out whats going on
Jan 22nd 2011 12:05   
Herbert ( Ray ) Pitre Advanced   author, songwriter, musician, councelor
THANK YOU LAURENCE for your advice on writing an article. I WILL take your advice seriously, and I will do my best to achieve at making it with what you've taught me. THANK YOU VERY MUCH !!!
Jan 22nd 2011 12:59   
Deyan Smardzhiev Freshman   
googd working site dear master! i wish to be usefull for your visitor and help each other echanged traffic
Jan 22nd 2011 15:08   
Chuck Ferraro Junior   
Great page. You really know what you are doing. I love passive income do you?
Jan 22nd 2011 16:59   
Syamsul Noor Senior   Author
happy writing and nice friendship. I interest.
Jan 22nd 2011 20:13   
Kelvin Wilson Advanced   Online Marketing Mentor
"You may believe that you are responsible for what you do,
but not for what you think. The truth is that you are responsible
for what you think, because it is only at this level that you can
exercise choice. What you do comes from what you think."
— Quote from A Course in Miracles
Jan 22nd 2011 21:43   
Sudeepa Sujata Bhatt. Committed   
wow !! it's nice, every body must visit this site
Jan 23rd 2011 04:06   
Philippe Moisan Magnate II   Tutorial videos, sci-fi writer
@Chuck Ferraro, you tried to get interest away from my RevPage by saying "I love passive income, do you?"

@Kelvin, your quote has nothing to do with my RevPage.

Not only both you didn't get the 20 credits when you joined my campaign for this RevPage, because I declined your comments, well you have also been reported for abuse.

In 24 hours, I will delete your comments ( and this one here I'm writing right now ).
Jan 23rd 2011 07:04   
Nnamdi A. Magnate III   Internet Marketer
@Philippe Lawrence is your true friend. A friend is one who is not afraid to tell you the truth even if he knows you will not accept it.

However, a mentor tells you how to get better, not just where you failed.

I think Lawrence is both to you.
Jan 23rd 2011 09:42   
Tony Koes Senior   Engineer
I had to smile, read "about:unfortunately" you 5 months ago with Laurence.. :D I saw your website, and I believe you have the skills to enter into writing an article .. great website. keep writing
Jan 23rd 2011 09:52   
Yvette Bergeron Innovator  Affiliate Marketing Distributor
sounds like something I could use, but not right at this particular moment
Jan 23rd 2011 10:46   
Philippe Moisan Magnate II   Tutorial videos, sci-fi writer
Nnamdi, my brother, Thanks for the "mentor" comment, I should have mentioned it. :)
Jan 23rd 2011 16:34   
Laurence P. Junior   Freelance Writer/Proofreader/Editor
Hi everyone.
I have been so busy that Philippe had to remind me to come and check this site again. I want to thank you all for your kind words. I believe in helping people where I can. Sadly, due to health reasons I can't do more. I will be adding more things to my site soon. I am writing an ebook on outsourcing, among other things, but have been tied up with clients as their work comes first.

Jan 23rd 2011 19:08   
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