Publishing Online

New Here and Need your help Please

by Martin Lee
Martin Lee Innovator  
Dear Friends,

Just joined this Group from Invitation by Valerie. Very Active Group.
I will be spending more time here to get to know some of you.

I'm from Singapore..........An aspiring Internet Marketer.

Just started my own group at : http://www.apsense.com/group/101662

Do pop by an take a look.

I've just joined a new program from Europe (you know more after visiting my Group listed above). And just created a Landing Page for the people I invite to visit.

I'm still in the process of putting in the testimonials (should be completed in a day or two).

And playing around to create my own opt-in form, Tel-a-Friend, etc.

Kindly visit my web-site, and do give me valuable comments......fonts colour, sizes, text, layout, etc.

Note that most of the text copy were from my Principal, but the main headings, and 7 Reasons were by me.

The Link as follows : http://mlnetbiz.com/hyip

Thanks.

Martin Lee
Singapore
MLNetbiz.com

"You Desired to be Rich"
Jul 18th 2007 19:26

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Comments

Douglas Coone Advanced   
Martin,

I bring this to you as a critique in the sincerest form. Other than a few typos, and a suggestion to use the standarized spelling of the word "program" I have one major concern with your site. It is the way you suggest a ROI or Return on Investment in the ad.

As a retired financial consultant and advisor for close to 30 years, your use of the term and proposing a ROI of 3.75-7.5% monthly initially is wrong, and may be illegal in some jurisdictions.

You can not have a true initial ROI on a principal unles that principal is accessible in some form another as either real money or real property that can be liquidated. Neither case is true, as once you have spent the $329 for the Stater Pack, I see no way for you to have access this or have it returned. Therefore, with no principal, you can not have a true ROI.

Now, once you have recouped the inital $320, then yes, you could possibly use that terminology, but until that is recouped, you do not have a ROI, but are just trying to recoup your initial "investment"

Doug
Jul 18th 2007 19:46   
Alan Green Advanced   
Hi Martin,

Just to say Welcome and congratulate you on your wisdom in
joining this gem of a program.

Like you, I live in Singapore and I discovered Apsense less than
a month ago.

I'm still discovering things and plan on setting up my first group
tomorrow.

Anyhow, good luck and happy sailing.

Alan Green
(alang)
Jul 18th 2007 19:52   
Douglas Coone Advanced   
Martin,
I just looked at the site again, focusing on the numbers this time. They don't add up, if I am reading it right.

Not counting the Fast Start Bonus, which would impact these numbers positively a little, the numbers work out this way.

Under the Click and Earn program, which is the base of this program, the maximum you can earn per month is $24, as they will only pay you for 2 referral units under you. At $24 a month, it will take you 13 months to recoup your investment, that is if you can find two people right away who are willing to "invest" $320 for the Encyclopaedia Britannica Online that some one can get for free here: http://www.britannica.com/

Also, in order to get the $800 Group Development Bonus you would have to do this:
recruit 2 new Personal Sponsors ( each whom has to recruit two individuals also to becoame a personal sponsor) to earn one Starter Pak. You need 30 Starter Paks, so 2x30=60 YOu have to recruit 60 people, and they have to recruit another 120, so your group is 180 strong now. Well good luck, trying to find a 180 people who will pay $320 for somthing they can get free with a simple search on Google.

Martin, I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but I would suggest you try to get your money back ASAP!

Doug

Jul 18th 2007 20:13   
Mark Stephen Hauser Professional   martinezshopper.webs.com
I have just joined your group and look forward to networking with you.

Thanks, Stephen
http://www.apsense.com/group/100225 (PLEASE JOIN MY GROUP)
Jul 19th 2007 07:49   
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