I need cratiqing on a article!
Hi everyone,
I am new to this group and this may not be appropriate for me to ask for help at the get go. But I have this article that I am going to be publishing with web sites online that deal with this issue.
The article is located at my group here on APSense called caregivers helpline.
The article has to do with the mental side of care-giving.
You do not have to be a group member and I'm not asking you to join my group unless you are interested. I just need this article looked at and someone to tell me what they think.
I would post the article here in this group but I'm not sure how long of a post I am aloud to post here.
So please go to:
http://www.apsense.com/subject/11705.html
and let me know what you think.
The article is tittled: Mental Care
Thanks so much for your help.
jewel
(jaded1)apsense username
Comments (3)
Jewel4
Thank You both
After I get a few more responses I will be revising this article and posting the final copy.
Collette Johnson12
Collette's Naturals
Hi Jewel
I find it fine except for some spelling & grammar errorsre: sort of speak should be "so to speak"
And some other minor errors.
Keep up the good work
Teodor M.11
Blockchain Real Estate
Do you need critiquing? I've read it and seems good written but I have almost nothing to do with this field. Hwever, living here in RoMania where 99% of politicians are stealing our lives, money and peace, sometimes it looks like I need a psychologist to help, or better a pastor to pray with me! ; )
But your article is good, keep writing!