Can this be improved? Plz leave constructive criticism!
This is my Safelist message that looks ok to me... Better than two others I just found and wish I hadn't sent!
Can it be improved?
~Hello ~
I joined tmiWireless Free Cell Phones just a few months ago and I have a downline
of more than 30 and my first $10.00 check came in the mail today.
It is Free to Join
It is Free to promote
The Free Professional Website with backoffice shows your clicks, visits and more...
Earn $50.00 for each customer activating a Free Cell Phone with service plan!
We give you a personalized website! NO COST! Your website even allows you to display
your own logo if you wish!
I waited to send this one out via safelists until I knew it would be paying me for my efforts!
I've had it on TE and 2 communities only !!!
Sincerely,
Beth Schmillen
Here's one of the banners from the site:
Check this out NOW ~ tmiWireless affiliate program
1 people like it
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Comments (5)
MasterTikitak6
Beth...your luck must have come in...I've had tmi for quiet a while and have yet to see a penny :(
Willing to give it another month or so, see if my luck changes.
Beth Schmillen10
Hi Linda,
Many of my sign ups have come from here and from over at Adland and I have it on Traffic Exchanges also.... But I was actively advertising it here the first month or two after I joined. Just stay with it and try lots of different banners....
banners really help if you can place them without having to pay a fee like we do here!
Beth Schmillen10
did i forge the subject line?
I don't know.... I think the "Earn $50.00 for each customer activating a Free Cell Phone with service plan!"
I may have used... I just got my 1st $10.00 check today from this.... only i phrased if differently?
Linda Welch8
I have been with them also, but I have not gotten any one under me yet , any hints....I top this
Thanks, Linda
Ann6
Beth - the ad is great! What are you using for the subject?