Need Feedback On My New Website

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Nice clean site. Easy to read.

You guys are just awesome. You really make me feel good about putting this together!

Thank you so much for the 'tops' to those of you who gave them to me...

Keep the suggestions coming, it's really helping me out!

Lora

p.s. I really like the color now that I put it up there too :)

Ok...I am liking the color too.....

Looks GREAT Lora!

Hi, Lora,

A nice clean site. Very business-like and those who don't want to ramble through acres of ads and flash banners will love it.

Colour can be helpful to highlight areas or draw the eye to them but your site doesn't have the usual collection of focal points within it.

The only real problem you have with it is that many people still surf at a screen definition of 800 - on that your site looks really cramped and uncomfortable. It doesn't fit the screen - being a few pixels too wide

Looks like it's coming together very nicely, Lora ! :)

Tops for you! :)

Hey it looks good nicely organized and has a good appearance to it.....

Thank you so much Garnet!!!

:)

Lora

Hi Lora,

Well, your certainly getting a lot of great feedback! I think your site looks good, nice clean layout and easy to read. What you might add to it would probably depend on how you are marketing it, don't be afraid to try different things with it to get the results you seek. All in all, looks good and nice job with the personal touch!

Thank you snakesmum :)

You figured it out before I got to ya' Viola!

:)

Lora

I figured out my sig then =)

maybe you can answer a question for me real quick - how do I make my link clickable in my sig here?

I like the picture you put in there.... and it loads fine for me. Thanks for your feedback on my site earlier :)

Hi Lora,

Your new pic loads fine for me. It adds that touch of colour that
the page needed. Looks great.

Terry,

You think I should add more benefits? I do have the links there to learn more about each opportunity. I personally hate being 'sold' to. So often that comes across as fake. I did add my toll-free number and an offer to try out a vacation on us. I want people to know that I am a real person, I am not just after their money. I guess I want more opinions on that one :)

I was thinking about a contact form instead of my number and email address. I do have it set up to go to my capture pa

Sounds like color wins, so I changed the road to a color pic! Does it load fast enough for you guys? It was a little slow for me. I do have another one in color, I just don't like it quite as much.

Thanks again!

Lora

Hi Lora,

Agree with some of the others, perhaps a little more colour, in either
your image at the top of the page, or on the page itself.

Your text is great - very well written, and I like it a lot. You make it
personal, which is good. Well done

Jean

Hi Lora,

I like the color scheme. Its different and looks professional.

The only thing I would add to the site is more benefits. You need to tell the visitor more of why they should look at your opportunities. Create a "I gotta have it" feeling by telling the visitor what is in it for them to make their life easier.

You also need a way to collect opt-in subscribers. If you can build a mailing list you can keep your opportunities in front of them. It takes 7-10 views of an offer before a

cool site, some my thoughts:

from my perspective i should change image/photo at the center of your site:
agree that the image is "your road to destiny" but hey! you have damm small road (on a screen 1400x1000 resolution) and it's grey (my road to destiny should be more colorfoul, for sure not grey.
so you could change format of your main picture (I suggest width the same as text column size and height as your bold text cell at right) and color - maybe just grass and trees around the road gree

Lora,
I love it and I think the idea of maybe having just a tad more color might be okay but then you know me - I am 'over-colored' at times! =)

You're an angel - thanks for helping me find this group!

Viola