Does Grandma look that Stupid?

Reducing everything to the simplest advertisement is tell the reader you assume they are completely ignorant and makes you loose credibility. Apsense is a person to person marketing site. Would you walk up to your friend or grandma in a coffee shop and say, "This company has produced 23 millionaires and pays you weekly guaranteed!! A very powerful company that is here to stay. Go check it out NOW and message me to get in on this great opportunity! bla bla bal ..." No? Why... because you would look stupid. I know English is a second language to many of you but you would be surprised how far a simple "Hello" can get you. Try introducing yourself. Start a conversation not a sales pitch. Help out a friend. And the number one rule - If you have not made millions of dollars yourself don't tell me you know how. my two peeps worth...