No magic, no false "LIGHTNING MONEY".

Posted by Janis
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Jun 18, 2007
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WE DON'T OFFER YOU SOME "MAGICAL" WAY TO EARN MONEY! WE DON'T OFFER YOU SYSTEM THAT SIMPLY "SPITS OUT" MONEY. WE OFFER YOU OPPORTUNITY. WE OFFER YOU OPPORTUNITY TO START BUSINESS. Sell highly demanded products and earn money. Sell the tools, that EVERYBODY needs. Simply go to http://make-it-grow.tripod.com and see for yourself!
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Valerie Hasara
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Marketing, Web Designer, Owner

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Janis,

You should not write your advertising in all capital letters.
IT MEANS YOU ARE SHOUTING at me.

Also you use the words we and everybody. People don’t really don’t care about them they want to know what is in it for me, try a rewrite with the word you. All the best

Valerie Hasara
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