You said to put my advertising here for critique.

Posted by Dave Fullmer
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Jun 18, 2007
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Here is an ad I am running on safe lists. If someone clicks on the link it takes them to my webpage that asks them to put their name, email and phone on a form. That url is http://NewbiesCanMakeMoney2.com/SafelistForm.html Once they sign up on the form, and then confirm to be on my mailing list, they are immediately sent the webpage the has the report (which is also a sales letter). That url is http://NewbiesCanMakeMoney2.com/SafelistSurvival.html The reason I included the urls is that where I would really like the critique is on those pages. I think they are pretty good, but I have discovered in the past that what I think is good can be improved many times over. So here is the ad: Are Safelists really working for you? See how I increased my results 10 Fold For Instant Access go to: http://NewbiesCanMakeMoney2.com/SafelistForm.html Thanks, Dave
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Mark Austin
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I think it's good. The picture is a little fuzzy, but the ad is short and to the point.

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Terry Simpson
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Hey Dave,
I checked out your page. I think it flows pretty well and gives the reader good information without giving it all away. Good job.

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Beth Schmillen
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Hi Dave...

I think that was a great idea. You accomplish 2 things with that one ad. Visitors and you'll know if they came from your safelist email or not!

Plust it reads very nice.... I haven't been sending safelist emails the past few weeks. that's inspiration and a new twist on how to approach it!

thanks
Beth

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