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Valerie’s Blog Review
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Hello Wayne,
Visually what you do is very appealing but you aren’t giving people a clear course of action. What is it that you want someone to do when they land on your page? Every time you post have one action in mind and see if you can’t get your readers to take it.
The use of pictures is outstanding. There is a lot of good info, but to me, it is almost too much. So much is thrown up there that it blows many of us away. For starters, there are so many large words at the very beginning that it turns me off a little.
So while you have a plethora of great info and graphics, I'm being honest cause you asked.
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Valerie Hasara15
Marketing, Web Designer, Owner
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Valerie’s Blog Review
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Hello Wayne,
Visually what you do is very appealing but you aren’t giving people a clear course of action. What is it that you want someone to do when they land on your page? Every time you post have one action in mind and see if you can’t get your readers to take it.
All the best
Mark Stephen Hauser11
martinezshopper.webs.com
The use of pictures is outstanding. There is a lot of good info, but to me, it is almost too much. So much is thrown up there that it blows many of us away. For starters, there are so many large words at the very beginning that it turns me off a little.
So while you have a plethora of great info and graphics, I'm being honest cause you asked.
Thanks, and good luck. Stephen