It’s become Makeover Madness! >> come see

Hi Muriel,

I have been in a mode of studying web pages, especially splash pages recently for what catches my attention. I am not sure how to do it, but if there were some way to startle or shock people into reading about glutathione you might get more traffic.

I assume you are advertising to a targeted audience?

I also assume that this is not a page you are putting on a traffic exchange?

I have found that a short curiosity ad works best. Put short interest building questions on it.

Hi Valerie,

You're Good! I'll have to put you on the payroll as my editor.

Thank you so much for your input. I know how much work this is to modify a webpage and I want you to know I appreciate it/

I like how you cleaned up my page.

I also saw why you took the bolding out of my text. It allowed some special bolding to make certain thoughts stand out.

Also, by reducing the type size, the page now fits better so people don't have to scroll to find the call for action (First Step link).

A

Muriel with the addition of your makeover I added your makeover link up top and notes on the page itself.

Valerie

Good job, Valerie,

I would sure appreciate your input as to why I am not getting much interest from my website. I tried to include information that I thought was of interest but maybe I have too much there.

www.murielh.ws/page3.html

Muriel

Just shows that alignment adjustments and changing from bold to normal type faces can make a difference. The use of bold does what it's suppose to do. Highlight important items. Good job.

Yes, the changes made the content reach out to you! Well done!

Tom

Henry’s Makeover

http://www.oyesucan.com/makeover/henry.htm

I didn’t go far with the alignment I would have had to rebuild your whole page for that. But the main thing is just you need to bring down your header.

Also I feel you use too many different fonts and large type. Check to see if your monitor is set for small font. Maybe you aren’t seeing how really large your type is.

Valerie

Wow, what a difference a little editing makes!

Thanks, Stephen
http://www.apsense.com/group/100225

Hi Valerie,

Great resource Dave has there, and
the tidy up was great.

Heres to you !

Lisa
CMU7

Yes Valerie this realy made a diferent.
You have any good improvement for my page?

http://www.ad-alyzer.com/727/SalesFunnelSecretshc

Henry
HCDenmark@yahoo.dk

Nice! Good statement, Dave--letting potential
downlines know upfront this is not a get rich
quick scheme.

~Paula/BoomSpress