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This is my Associated Content Profile page - links to 3 published articles are there.
http://www.associatedcontent.com/user/77498/karen_weir.html
http://www.apsense.com/article/100934.html
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I am really looking forward to your feedback!
Thanks!
Karen
Comments (2)
Karen Weir9
Local Internet Advertising Consultant
LOL, thank you Valerie. The article started out to be about network marketing, but I went off on a tangent. I love that opener!! Seriously, you don't mind if I use it?
Your article is absolutely outstanding! I love it, and yes we do think alike. I have a grasshopper too... and sometimes I wish he were an ant (not really, but they are easier to manage). My daughter is more like an ant than a grasshopper, but really more of a Queen Bee ;)
Thanks for the feedback!
Karen
Valerie Hasara15
Marketing, Web Designer, Owner
Karen
I had to smile when I read your article, take a look at mine, we think alike.
[url=http://ezinearticles.com/?Educating-a-Grasshopper&id=81181]Educating-a-Grasshopper[/url]
The one thing I think your article is missing is the attention grabber that pulls people in. You start out with >> Ever notice in network marketing >> but your article is not really about network marketing. You are going to loose people right away.
How about this as a way to start your article?
If you