I'd Love to get your feedback on These Articles

Posted by Karen Weir
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Jun 4, 2007
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This is my Associated Content Profile page - links to 3 published articles are there. http://www.associatedcontent.com/user/77498/karen_weir.html http://www.apsense.com/article/100934.html By the way... if you aren't a member of AC, you can get paid to submit your content here! http://www.associatedcontent.com/join.html?refer=77498 I am really looking forward to your feedback! Thanks! Karen
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Karen Weir
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Local Internet Advertising Consultant

LOL, thank you Valerie. The article started out to be about network marketing, but I went off on a tangent. I love that opener!! Seriously, you don't mind if I use it?

Your article is absolutely outstanding! I love it, and yes we do think alike. I have a grasshopper too... and sometimes I wish he were an ant (not really, but they are easier to manage). My daughter is more like an ant than a grasshopper, but really more of a Queen Bee ;)

Thanks for the feedback!

Karen

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Valerie Hasara
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Marketing, Web Designer, Owner

Karen

I had to smile when I read your article, take a look at mine, we think alike.
[url=http://ezinearticles.com/?Educating-a-Grasshopper&id=81181]Educating-a-Grasshopper[/url]

The one thing I think your article is missing is the attention grabber that pulls people in. You start out with >> Ever notice in network marketing >> but your article is not really about network marketing. You are going to loose people right away.

How about this as a way to start your article?

If you

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