Opinions needed!

Hi all! Been working countless hours on my mobile marketing I am affiliated with. Today I put my ad on this site after I spent last 14 hours non-stop making it. For anyone that clicked on the amazing-deals-superstore.com ad today, I would love to know your thoughts. It is NOT all the way done quite yet. I do have a mobile version released today as well but am attempting (been trickin me a little) to step it up to be better in all ways. I took few years off from marketing when I went to work at Centurylink and now with mobile marketing (which wasn't around when I stopped) it's like a whole new game. Starting from tadpole stage I would say. Anyway, would love your thoughts and opinions and if anyone of you has ideas or maybe know some tools to help, please let me know. I would be in your debt. This is my ONLY source of income at this time and I am tired of working a dead end job at corps. I want this to be my financial freedom (not looking to be rich, just make enough to be comfortable). Again, thanks for your support and wisdom!