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Can this be improved? Plz leave constructive criticism!

by Beth Schmillen
This is my Safelist message that looks ok to me... Better than two others I just found and wish I hadn't sent!

Can it be improved?


~Hello ~

I joined tmiWireless Free Cell Phones just a few months ago and I have a downline
of more than 30 and my first $10.00 check came in the mail today.

It is Free to Join

It is Free to promote

The Free Professional Website with backoffice shows your clicks, visits and more...

Earn $50.00 for each customer activating a Free Cell Phone with service plan!
We give you a personalized website! NO COST! Your website even allows you to display
your own logo if you wish!

I waited to send this one out via safelists until I knew it would be paying me for my efforts!

I've had it on TE and 2 communities only !!!

Sincerely,
Beth Schmillen

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About Beth Schmillen Professional     

1,931 connections, 20 recommendations, 2,643 honor points.
Joined APSense since, May 18th, 2007, From Pacific Northwest!, United States.

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Comments

Ann Advanced  
Beth - the ad is great! What are you using for the subject?


Mar 15th 2008 23:47   
Linda Welch Committed   
I have been with them also, but I have not gotten any one under me yet , any hints....I top this
Thanks, Linda
Mar 16th 2008 11:56   
Beth Schmillen Professional   
did i forge the subject line?

I don't know.... I think the "Earn $50.00 for each customer activating a Free Cell Phone with service plan!"

I may have used... I just got my 1st $10.00 check today from this.... only i phrased if differently?




Mar 17th 2008 21:35   
Beth Schmillen Professional   
Hi Linda,

Many of my sign ups have come from here and from over at Adland and I have it on Traffic Exchanges also.... But I was actively advertising it here the first month or two after I joined. Just stay with it and try lots of different banners....

banners really help if you can place them without having to pay a fee like we do here!
Mar 17th 2008 21:37   
MasterTikitak Advanced   
Beth...your luck must have come in...I've had tmi for quiet a while and have yet to see a penny :(
Willing to give it another month or so, see if my luck changes.

Jul 21st 2008 01:04   
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