Can this be improved? Plz leave constructive criticism!
by Beth Schmillen This is my Safelist message that looks ok to me... Better than two others I just found and wish I hadn't sent!Can it be improved?
~Hello ~
I joined tmiWireless Free Cell Phones just a few months ago and I have a downline
of more than 30 and my first $10.00 check came in the mail today.
It is Free to Join
It is Free to promote
The Free Professional Website with backoffice shows your clicks, visits and more...
Earn $50.00 for each customer activating a Free Cell Phone with service plan!
We give you a personalized website! NO COST! Your website even allows you to display
your own logo if you wish!
I waited to send this one out via safelists until I knew it would be paying me for my efforts!
I've had it on TE and 2 communities only !!!
Sincerely,
Beth Schmillen
Here's one of the banners from the site:
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Comments
Linda Welch
I have been with them also, but I have not gotten any one under me yet , any hints....I top this Thanks, Linda Mar 16th 2008 11:56 |
Beth Schmillen
did i forge the subject line? I don't know.... I think the "Earn $50.00 for each customer activating a Free Cell Phone with service plan!" I may have used... I just got my 1st $10.00 check today from this.... only i phrased if differently? Mar 17th 2008 21:35 |
Beth Schmillen
Hi Linda, Many of my sign ups have come from here and from over at Adland and I have it on Traffic Exchanges also.... But I was actively advertising it here the first month or two after I joined. Just stay with it and try lots of different banners.... banners really help if you can place them without having to pay a fee like we do here! Mar 17th 2008 21:37 |
MasterTikitak
Beth...your luck must have come in...I've had tmi for quiet a while and have yet to see a penny :( Willing to give it another month or so, see if my luck changes. Jul 21st 2008 01:04 |
Beth - the ad is great! What are you using for the subject?
Mar 15th 2008 23:47